What do you think about this story?

i like it i would read thattt!! haha andd mm i think you should ahve themm fight anddd like the boy gets hurt and the fairy girl has to try too helpp himmm and while everyone in herr world of faries is fighting against herrr andd she tries to make peaceee wondering why they all cant liveee together though they are different they should accept eachotherr no matter if you are hman or a fairie hahah im not very creative so sorry!